Sweet Baby Gifts

Me and my friend wrote a song.
Tell me what you think
BE BRUTALLY HONEST.
Also, let me know what style it should be sung in.
Example: Country, classical, hip-hop, rap?
Thanks A lot!

You make me go around when you touch the ground.
I felt so sad when you looked at my dad and he told you to leave.
I could see you weren’t pleased.
But, we had some fun out there in the sun
And I just wanna let you know that

Last night, at your place, on a date.
I thought it was fate.

But then you went through my phone again and again,
I thought down the road we could actually be friends.

CHORUS
You told me lies, so I said good-bye to you.
I’m not your boo.

Last weekend you asked me to lend you my new C-D
But instead, I found out you were just playin me
When your with your boys you treat my like a toy,
Like I’m a cheap plastic doll,
Well I wanna tell you,
You’re not getting another call.

You were sweet to me.
Saying that we would always be in love forever
Now I’m telling you it’s never … gunna happen.

You told the world rumours about me.
Don’t hide underneath your skin
There’s no way out, I win
I know you cheated, and you lied
I know who you are even under your disguise
So just let me be free.
So let me be.

CHORUS
You told me lies, so I had to say good-bye to you.
I needa let you know
You better not come to my show.
And I swear to you.
I’m not your boo.

You gave me gifts and spoiled me like crazy
You can take it all back I don’t wanna hear you call me baby
And telling me that I’m your yellow sweet daisy.
I threw it all out; you can go threw the trash.
The dinners you payed for, just take all the cash.
Go check my text-messages I deleted them all.
You even ditched me for your friends at the mall.
I should’ve seen it before, and kicked you out the door.
Now I’m stuck in this place, just thinking in space.
About how you treated me, and how I couldn’t see.
That you were mean, you were rude,
You didn’t care about me, just like I was a dude.
This wasn’t real, not for me or you.
And I really feel used.

CHORUS
You told me lies, so I had to say good-bye to you.
I needa let you know
That you gotta go
And I swear to you.
I’m not your boo.

Back in the day I thought that some day we were gunna have a future.
You screwed it all up, and now I’m stuck in muck, just tryna find a cure.

CHORUS
You told me lies, so I had to say good-bye to you.
I needa let you know
That you gotta go
And I swear to you.
I’m not your boo.

THANKS GUYS !

i like the chorus some parts are just weird tho
maybe r and b or rap